- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 07:02, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
Bachata Rosa
edit- ... that Juan Luis Guerra received a Grammy Award for an album that involves a beehive, a high bilirubin, and a fishbowl?
- Reviewed: Edward Sneyd Clay
Created/expanded by Magiciandude (talk). Self nom at 05:24, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that the Grammy Award-winning album Bachata Rosa by Juan Luis Guerra brought the bachata music mainstream in the Dominican Republic?
I prefer the second hook, the content of the first one is too trivial. However, there is no specific reference for what it says, neither at the lead or at "Cultural impact". Reference that sentence, and it may be ready. Cambalachero (talk) 19:04, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
- Okay, I reused a reference to support the second hook. Erick (talk) 19:16, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
Seems fine. A link to Bachata (music) was a good idea as well, but as t is a trivial fix I already fixed it myself. However, as a gesture of courtesy, I propose to wait for Magiciandude, the original nominator, to see if he agrees with the new hook and edits, before marking it as ready.Sorry, I got confused with the signature, and thought I was dealing with 2 different users Cambalachero (talk) 19:26, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
