Template:Did you know nominations/Bankruptcy of Penn Central
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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 09:54, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
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Bankruptcy of Penn Central
- ... that the bankruptcy of Penn Central in 1970 was the largest in American history at the time? Source: George Drury, "Penn Central history remembered" [1] Classic Trains Magazine
- ALT1: ... that American company Penn Central entered bankruptcy in 1970 as a railroad, and emerged eight years later as an insurance company that survives today? Source: [2] "Penn Central Is Alive, And Well, On Its Own" Spartanburg Herald, and [3] "Companies betting on name game" The Albany Herald
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eye (Alexander McQueen collection)
Created by Trainsandotherthings (talk). Self-nominated at 22:00, 13 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Bankruptcy of Penn Central; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Will review. Longhornsg (talk) 22:32, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
- If your idea of reviewing is to nominate the article for deletion, maybe let someone else review instead? Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:50, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- I guess it's tough love. EEng 17:16, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- I do think the multiple authors of books on the subject would be rather surprised to hear it's not notable enough for Wikipedia. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 21:37, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- Surely you know by now to look at my posts from several different angles. The Penn Central bankruptcy was a landmark, and obviously notable. EEng 22:50, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- That went completely over my head. Guess that's what happens when you edit while tired. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 23:58, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- Surely you know by now to look at my posts from several different angles. The Penn Central bankruptcy was a landmark, and obviously notable. EEng 22:50, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- I do think the multiple authors of books on the subject would be rather surprised to hear it's not notable enough for Wikipedia. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 21:37, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- I guess it's tough love. EEng 17:16, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- If your idea of reviewing is to nominate the article for deletion, maybe let someone else review instead? Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:50, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- This nomination still needs an actual review. Epicgenius (talk) 13:04, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
I like ALT0 very much ... it's nice and punchy. But if we were to instead go with ALT1, I would suggest a reworded version for two reasons: First, to say that something "survives today" is redundant; if it survives, the "today" is understood. Second, the first part of the hook is wordier than it needs to be. And maybe we can combine the two hook facts if we tighten things up, and bold the part that will get clicks. So ...
- ALT2: ... that eight years after the largest bankruptcy in American history at that time, the Penn Central railroad became an insurance company? Daniel Case (talk) 03:21, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- That is quite a funny coincidence. My only concern with the proposed ALT2 is that the company was not known as the "Penn Central railroad". Trainsandotherthings (talk) 15:39, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that eight years after the largest bankruptcy in American history at that time, the Penn Central railroad became an insurance company? Daniel Case (talk) 03:21, 30 August 2023 (UTC)