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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:51, 29 June 2015 (UTC)

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Bertie Snowball

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  • ... that the 17-year-old golfer Bertie Snowball, just a kid at the time, defeated the legendary British professional Harry Vardon in a match in Ireland in 1905?

Created by Nigej (talk). Self-nominated at 16:19, 16 June 2015 (UTC).

  • This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts have inline citations, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright problems. I have added Michael W. Parker to the credits and I do not think a QPQ review is required. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
  • The clause "just a kid at the time" is confusing and superfluous. He was 17. Or he was a kid (which isn't true; he was just shy of legal age). I think the hook should be worded:
  • ALT1: ... that the 17-year-old golfer Bertie Snowball defeated the legendary British professional Harry Vardon in a 1905 match in Ireland? Yoninah (talk) 15:22, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • We need to remove the "in Ireland" since it happened in England. Otherwise I'm happy with it. Or we could could still try my original idea about being a pro in 4 countries. Nigej (talk) 15:30, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • The hook has been changed completely since I approved it and I think this nomination should consequently be disallowed for DYK. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:46, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Not guilty Nigej (talk) 19:26, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Actually I was being a bit harsh, because I see it was Michael W. Parker who changed it with this edit. The original, approved hook was
I will go with whatever hook Nigej likes best. It was his idea to do the DYK nomination anyway.--Wapiti (talk) 22:26, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • After that bit of confusion, I will reinstate the tick for ALT0. There is nothing in the article about Harry Vardon being "legendary" so I have struck the other hooks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:37, 28 June 2015 (UTC) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:37, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
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