- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:46, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
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Bin Cheng
- ALT0:... that British jurist Bin Cheng invented a legal theory which states that a customary international law may be created "overnight"? Source: Developments in Customary International Law, pp. 24-25
- Reviewed: Andrey Kelin
Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 05:26, 8 November 2019 (UTC).
Reviewing... DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 08:06, 12 November 2019 (UTC)- Article created on 7th Nov and nominated within the 7 day period. DYK check tool returns a value of 2992 characters (507 words) "readable prose size"; is long enough. A basic read of the prose shows it is policy compliant - neutral tone and cites sources. Earwigs copyvio detector returns a value of 23.1% "violation unliekly". Further most of the similarities between sources and content are names, designations or distinctions. Copyvio check ok.
- Length of hook ok. The hook is interesting (But usage of "invented", legal theory, usage of the word customary - can be misleading in certain ways and not easy to understand for those who arent familiar with these terms in relation to the said law but I guess that is a domain matter so we can let it be) Since the overall meaning comes through and also is interesting its ok.
- The hook is mentioned inline and supported by a source. A line in the original source says - source says - "Bin Cheng finds that a customary international law norm might be created instantly "over night"". I am not sure how much removing the word "norm" does to the meaning.
- Accordingly, hook ALT0 is fine according to me, but I am suggesting a simpler hook if Zanhe has no problem with it...
- ALT 1: ... that Bin Cheng has been described as the "Father of International Air Law". Source : Widely acknowledged as the "Father of International Air Law,”
- Also, if you could maybe rephrase ALT0 or make it simpler or change or remove a few words...... not compulsory but a suggestion. Thanks.
DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 08:48, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
- @DiplomatTesterMan: Thanks for your detailed review. I'm fine with ALT1. -Zanhe (talk) 08:04, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
