- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 10:13, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
Brian Van Mentz
Created by Gbawden (talk). Self-nominated at 08:55, 19 April 2020 (UTC).
- Did a quick copyedit of the hooks since there were no links to the relevant articles, but will leave the review to another editor. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Gbawden: This looks good, but there is one issue: epicgenius (talk) 19:01, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Thanks. I think I have reworded what I can. Will check for blank spaces Gbawden (talk) 07:19, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Gbawden: No problem.
I think it is better now, and good to go. epicgenius (talk) 14:00, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
| General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Notwithstanding the blockquote, there are a few sentences that may need to be paraphrased, per analysis. E.g. "Junkers Ju87 (confirmed) and a Henschel Hs126 (unconfirmed) on 15th May."
- Other problems: - There are a few things that might need to be cleaned up per MOS (e.g. no spaces before commas) but this can be easily fixed.
| Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall:
epicgenius (
talk) 19:01, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
epicgenius (talk) 19:01, 19 April 2020 (UTC)