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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 11:58, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Bukit Batu Biosphere Reserve

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  • Reviewed: not necessary as this is not self nomination

Created/expanded by Doseiai2 (talk). Nominated by Annas86 (talk) at 06:46, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Length, date, hook's ref verified. Interesting hook. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:03, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Sources are bare URLs.
Hook is incorrect English. "are", not "is"
Sourcing for hook needs to be at the end of the sentence, not end of the paragraph containing the hook.
Copyvio - Duplication Detector finds that entire section of "Flora and Fauna" was duplicated from Ref #3
The Flora and Fauna section only has Flora, no Fauna
Maile66 (talk) 12:26, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Doseiai2, who created the article, was notified; but I also notified the nominator, Annas86. If the Copyvio issue isn't addressed within the next 3 hours, I'll remove it myself. --Rosiestep (talk) 01:41, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
    • Sorry, actually I wait for Doseiai2. But I think its ok to remove that section now.*Annas* (talk) 05:03, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
      • I removed the Copyvio section. --Rosiestep (talk) 14:31, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
  • DYK - no bare urls. Additionally, this article is about a biosphere. Removing the flora and fauna, and replacing it with one sentence so you can have a hook, removes the substance of the biosphere. Maile66 (talk) 14:45, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
The creator of the article hasn't edited since June 21 and may still be unaware of the issues. I have restored the Flora and fauna heading and rewritten the section, and identified that source, to provide a model. This also reveals inaccuracy in the hook: the source actually says there are 29 protected species of plant in the reserve, and is apparently giving 9 as examples. Yngvadottir (talk) 17:23, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
Thank you for doing that editing work. Duplication Detector is stalling out right now, but I'm AGF on what you did. So, there are now two items to be taken care of: (1) An accurate hook; (2) Bare URLs 1 through 8, excluding #3 which you formatted as an example. Maile66 (talk) 17:34, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
I reformatted the bare URLs. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:56, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for reformatted the bare URLs. For the hook, I suggest ALT1:... that there are Sumatran elephants and Sumatran Tigers in the Bukit Batu Biosphere Reserve? *Annas* (talk) 07:45, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
As far as I can make out the current page title is incorrect - I think this should be moved, preferably to Giam Siak Kecil-Bukit Batu Biosphere Reserve, the UNESCO Man and the Biosphere appellation; or to Bakut Batu Wildlife Reserve, the national designation of part of what is discussed; [1] (I only know how to do copy-paste moves...) Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 19:19, 2 July 2012 (UTC)
I agree that this article should be renamed and I did so, Giam Siak Kecil-Bukit Batu, to match up with two of the references, but especially as this is the name used by UNESCO. I recuse myself from the approval process as I've made several changes to this article. So here's ALT2, which is really alt1 + name change: ... that there are Sumatran elephants and Sumatran Tigers in Giam Siak Kecil-Bukit Batu? Rosiestep (talk) 03:34, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the help. I don't know what is needed to qualify for nomination, please feel free to make the necessary changes. Doseiai2 (talk) 09:16, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

: Length, date, ALT2 hook checked out; good to go; (I reworked a little, reduced the editorializing, and added a couple of refs, but I don't think that disqualifies me from approving this hook), thanks, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 09:45, 18 July 2012 (UTC) (PS another possibility would be ALT3 ... that there are Sumatran elephants and Sumatran Tigers in Giam Siak Kecil-Bukit Batu, a UNESCO Man and the Biosphere Reserve? but this would require someone else's sign-off, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 09:45, 18 July 2012 (UTC))

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