Template:Did you know nominations/Carole J. Olshavsky
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:32, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
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Carole J. Olshavsky
edit- ... that Carole J. Olshavsky was the first woman to be appointed state architect for Ohio?
- ALT1:... that as first female state architect of Ohio, Carole J. Olshavsky helped create legislation that established qualifications-based bid assessment for the state?
- Reviewed: Donald Trump presidential campaign, 2000
Created by Fuzchia (talk). Self-nominated at 17:07, 14 October 2015 (UTC).
This short biography is long enough and has good citations including ones that support both of the proposed hooks. It neutral. I did find some bits of similar phrasing which I rewrote. Pity there is no picture but her achievements are quite abstract. Thanks to Fuzchia. (see below) Victuallers (talk) 22:03, 21 October 2015 (UTC)- unapproved ALT2:... that Ohio's first female state architect helped make it illegal to simply choose the cheapest bid?
