- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 00:15, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
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Cecilia Bouzat
edit- ... that after Cecilia Bouzat was given a L'Oréal-UNESCO Award for Women in Science she was received by the President of Argentina?
- Reviewed: not sure if its required but anyway QPQ = Helen Maitland Armstrong
- Comment: newbie warning - be helpful!
5x expanded by Gracevevans (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 17:32, 13 November 2015 (UTC).
On 2 June 537 char, on day of nomination 2818 char 5x = 2685/ Long enough. Nom on day expansion completed/new enough. Neutrally worded. No apparent copyvios. QPQ completed. Hook 127 char/under maximum. Is verified immediately following statement and interesting. A few in-line citations missing: "husband had the first of their two children" and the entire section marked "Research focus" except first sentence. Photo is free use per commons with attribution, however, is not used in the article and cannot appear in DYK unless it is in the article. Since our subject is not in the photo, I am not sure that it is necessary to link the photo of the president? L'Oréal-UNESCO Awards for Women in Science is overlinked. Appears as a link 3 times. Also need a c/e on the last paragraph. 3rd sentence beginning "in 2014, she received an award from L'Oréal-UNESCO Awards for Women in Science" does not begin with a capital "In" and repeats most of the information given in the top 2 sentences. Nothing major to fix, but if you can fix these few items, should be GTG. SusunW (talk) 01:13, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Susun. I have addressed all the points (a 3rd editor deleted the picture before you saw it). I think the rule is one ref per para but I have taken your interpretation and referenced or removed items that were not cited. (They are from translating so you may see more than me). I think this a very good first article by @Gracevevans. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 11:02, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
Great! All items addressed. Looks good to go. Congratulations Gracevevans. (For the record, I am going to clarify that she was a Laureate and not a fellow, as the annual L'Oréal awards have two tiers). SusunW (talk) 14:16, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
