Template:Did you know nominations/Christina Aryani
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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Grk1011 (talk) 13:30, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
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Christina Aryani
- ... that Indonesian politician Christina Aryani's 2019 campaign for Jakarta's 2nd electoral district included a visit to Europe? Source: [1]: "Selama ini mereka (pemilih luar negeri) tak disentuh, jadi kemarin saya ke Eropa, mereka tak tahu siapa anggota DPR mereka sekarang yang representasikan mereka di DPR, tujuh orang itu enggak pernah datang, ada datang untuk shopping," jelas Christina.
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Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 05:03, 18 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Christina Aryani; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
This article just barely reaches the 1,500 character minimum. The hook is sourced, but I'm not sure that folks would find it very interesting. My response to it was, "ok...that's nice?". The hook should entice readers to want to learn more. I'd suggest finding a bit more about the campaign. The interesting part is included in the article as a parenthetical; it should be highlighted a bit more if that's the interesting part. QPQ checks out. Grk1011 (talk) 18:44, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
