Template:Did you know nominations/Christmas in Hawaii

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 20:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Christmas in Hawaii

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... that Christmas in Hawaii was not celebrated until the arrival of Protestant missionaries from England in 1820?

Reviewed: Constant Puyo, Gherman Pântea

Created/expanded by Rcsprinter123 (talk). Self nom at 21:46, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Newness and length are fine, hook could use some more wikilinking, and the article could definitely use some copyediting. There is an instance of "we" in the article as well as some improper grammar/comma use that needs to be addressed. I am also unsure of the accuracy of the hook, as the reference in the article says the Protestant missionaries came from New England. Eagles 24/7 (C) 07:55, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Issues addressed.

ALT 1: ... that Christmas in Hawaii was not celebrated until the arrival of Protestant missionaries from New England in 1820?
Can't understand why I missed the 'New' of 'New England'! What comma use? Rcsprinter (talk) 12:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

I've done a quick copyedit of the article to address the punctuation issues and everything else looks good now. Eagles 24/7 (C) 17:47, 2 January 2012 (UTC)