- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 08:13, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
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Cu hulu
- ... that the Ming dynasty novella The Jealous Wife was written by the "Bishop of the Women-Taming Sect"?
Created by Kingoflettuce (talk). Self-nominated at 06:00, 5 August 2021 (UTC).
Doing... --Gazal world (talk) 09:50, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Reviewer hasn't finished in 11 days, I'll take this review.
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith - Interesting:
- Other problems:
- I'd leave the title untranslated; also, I'd use a different, more hooky translation (Master of the Doctrine of Subduing Women), and a note that it is a translation. As an ALT0a: That Ming dynasty novella Cu hulu was written under a pseudonym that might translate to "Master of the Doctrine of Subduing Women"?
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Overall: 
Open to workshopping the hook–there are other alts we can use. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 00:44, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- oops, i have to ping people? @Kingoflettuce: theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 01:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- seems less "fun" if we included the "under a pseudonym that might translate..." bit, and the translation has a nicer ring than the original title. But I think it's your call as the reviewer! Cheers, Kingoflettuce (talk) 07:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- see also Template:Did you know nominations/Bian er chai Kingoflettuce (talk) 07:13, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- @Kingoflettuce: sorry about the delay, I forgot to watch this page. How about:
- ALT0b: ... that the Ming dynasty novella The Jealous Wife might have been written by the "Master of the Doctrine of Subduing Women"?
- seems like a good balance between brevity/hookiness and accuracy to me. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 08:01, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
- sounds good to me! Cheers, Kingoflettuce (talk) 16:57, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Great! Well done on the article, I thought it was really interesting. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 01:50, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- @Kingoflettuce: sorry about the delay, I forgot to watch this page. How about:
- see also Template:Did you know nominations/Bian er chai Kingoflettuce (talk) 07:13, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- seems less "fun" if we included the "under a pseudonym that might translate..." bit, and the translation has a nicer ring than the original title. But I think it's your call as the reviewer! Cheers, Kingoflettuce (talk) 07:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
