Template:Did you know nominations/Deep Creek (Pennsylvania)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 03:25, 6 September 2014 (UTC)
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Deep Creek (Pennsylvania)
edit- ... that Deep Creek is shallow?
5x expanded by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 01:12, 3 September 2014 (UTC).
Let me start off by saying that this may be the best hook I've ever seen for a DYK. It took me a moment to process, but I was dying laughing within seconds. Anyway, as for the article, I'd say you're already good to go! It's long enough, was expanded enough recently to warrant inclusion (5x expansion since September 3, 2014), the prose is good, and the references all check out. Very article! My only comment for improving it in general would be to merge some of the sections. Individual headers for a sentence or two feels pretty unnecessary, and doesn't look fantastic. And seriously, that hook: incredible. Sock (tocktalk) 13:53, 4 September 2014 (UTC)
