Template:Did you know nominations/Deep Cut Gardens
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Rjjiii talk 14:06, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
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Deep Cut Gardens
- ... that Deep Cut Gardens in New Jersey contains a stone replica of Mount Vesuvius commissioned by mobster Vito Genovese?
- Source: The Monmouth County Park System: The First Fifty Years - "At Genovese’s request, Caruso built a “Mt. Vesuvius” pseudo-volcano that erupted with smoke during parties."
- ALT1: ... that Deep Cut Gardens in New Jersey contains a stone replica of Mount Vesuvius that once erupted smoke at the behest of mobster Vito Genovese? Source: The Monmouth County Park System: The First Fifty Years - "At Genovese’s request, Caruso built a “Mt. Vesuvius” pseudo-volcano that erupted with smoke during parties."
- ALT2: ... that, at the behest of mobster Vito Genovese, Deep Cut Gardens in New Jersey contains a stone replica of Mount Vesuvius that once erupted smoke? Source: The Monmouth County Park System: The First Fifty Years - "At Genovese’s request, Caruso built a “Mt. Vesuvius” pseudo-volcano that erupted with smoke during parties."
- Reviewed:
FossilDS (talk) 03:24, 31 August 2024 (UTC).
- Article length is fine, article is recently created, Earwig shows no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, article appears to be reliably sourced.
I think I prefer the shorter hook (might suggest an ALT for the second one)Have suggested a revised hook. Paul W (talk) 10:44, 2 September 2024 (UTC) - I'm fine with the revised hook (ALT2). Thank you for the review! FossilDS (talk) 16:24, 2 September 2024 (UTC)