Template:Did you know nominations/Dolores Zohrab Liebmann
The following is an archived discussion of Dolores Zohrab Liebmann's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s (talk) page, the nominated article's (talk) page, or the Did you know
(talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page. See the talk page guidelines for (more) information.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 18:43, 19 March 2013 (UTC).
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
Dolores Zohrab Liebmann
edit
- ... that philanthropist Dolores Zohrab Liebmann (pictured) was deeply affected by witnessing the arrest and subsequent murder of her father Krikor Zohrab as part of the Armenian Genocide?
- Reviewed: Southern Rhodesian involvement in the First World War
- Comment: The article was created months ago but was blanked due to copyright issues. It has been recently reinstated (March 15, 2013) and is considered a new article.
Created by Proudbolsahye (talk), Ymblanter (talk). Nominated by Proudbolsahye (talk) at 23:51, 15 March 2013 (UTC).
New and long enough. The new text is sufficiently different from the source text and even the blanked text. I'm conflicted about whether the hook is interesting enough - it seems like the most interesting thing in the article, but it makes me ask: "so what?" Is there any special way that this personal experience affected her career or foundation? But maybe people have heard of the scholarship and would be interested in this fact about her life. So I'm not going to hold the nomination on that point. Shrigley (talk) 19:41, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
- Well her life has a lot to do with the life of her father's. After all, she established the Krikor Zohrab foundation in his name and honor. I think the DYK hook is catchy and the picture is gripping. There a certain melancholic aura in the photograph which I think fits perfectly well with the hook. Also the hook may give the reader a who? what? how? when? kind of approach which I believe is the most effective. Proudbolsahye (talk) 00:40, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
