Template:Did you know nominations/Dora and the Fantastical Creatures

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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Z1720 talk 02:17, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

Dora and the Fantastical Creatures

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... that the animation in the short film Dora and the Fantastical Creatures was inspired by by Mexican folk art and alebrijes? Source: https://www.comingsoon.net/movies/features/1350971-dora-and-the-fantastical-creatures-interview-director-william-mata-on-reimagining-the-iconic-character
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5x expanded by Zingo156 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:05, 29 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Dora and the Fantastical Creatures; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

This is my first time reviewing a DYK nomination, so I would like a second opinion on this.
- According to DYKcheck, you started 5x expanding on December 28, 2023. You nominated the article for DYK the day after, so it passes newness in this case.
- Article is long enough (4601 characters).
- The current hook you have proposed (ALT0) is not really interesting. I'd recommend that you come up with a new one.
- The article needs some work, especially in the "Reception" section. It uses the "X said Y" format, which is discouraged. See this essay for ideas.
- Earwig detected quotes used in the article that are properly cited to their sources.

Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 15:55, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Zingo156 have you seen the above? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:11, 25 January 2024 (UTC)

Davest3r08 AirshipJungleman29 apologies for not answering speedily. Yeah, I will address the articles problems before the end of January. Zingo156 (talk) 07:41, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

@Zingo156: Have the issues been resolved, and thus this is ready for a review? If issues are not resolved soon, this nomination might be closed as unsuccessful. Z1720 (talk) 16:22, 5 February 2024 (UTC)

@Z1720: Yeah I just attended to them. Sorry for the wait. Zingo156 (talk) 15:21, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

@Davest3r08: Per the above, this nomination is ready for you to continue your review. Z1720 (talk) 18:25, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Thank you @Z1720. _{(courtesy pinging @Zingo156)}

Anyways:

Comingsoon.net is considered reliable by WP:FILM/R.
I'm not really sure about this modified hook either, as the show has general Latin American representation ([1] [2]) and that would just be saying a well-known fact: Dora is Latin American and the show references Latino culture.
The article cites CinemaBlend, a website that solely exists as entertainment and is most likely not a RS. I'd recommend improving the article's sourcing. Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 00:08, 11 February 2024 (UTC)

@Zingo156: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 18:21, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

Going to fail this nomination. While Zingo did address the issues from the article, they did not change the hook and have not edited this page in seven days. Feel free to renominate this if you consider this as a mistake. Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 16:44, 24 February 2024 (UTC)