- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
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Doris Stevens
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Doris Stevens
1917 Bastille Day picketers
... that Doris Stevens (pictured) gathered data on women's legal status throughout the world, which resulted in the passage of the first international agreement on women's rights?
- ALT1:... that Doris Stevens was arrested on Bastille Day for participating in the Silent Sentinel protests (pictured)?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ann Hawkes Hay
- Comment: Please run during International Women's Month
Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk), Rosiestep (talk), and Megalibrarygirl (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 23:41, 3 March 2016 (UTC).
- image for Alt1 hook is File:Bastille Day spells prison for sixteen suffragettes who picketed the White House. Miss Julia . . . - NARA - 533766.tif. I don't know how to input it properly, sorry. SusunW (talk) 23:45, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
Done Fixed. Yoninah (talk) 23:54, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
GA received same day as nomination. New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I think the first hook is best for International Women's Day, but it makes her sound like she acted alone. Would you like to identify her as chair of the Inter-American Commission of Women? Hook refs verified and cited inline. Image is freely-licensed. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 21:49, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
- Yoninah I'll try. What about (198 chars): SusunW (talk) 04:22, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Doris Stevens (pictured), chair of the Inter-American Commission of Women, presented data on laws affecting women, which resulted in the passage of the first international agreement on women's rights?
- Thank you. You could shorten it a tiny bit more by wording it:
- ALT3: ... that as chair of the Inter-American Commission of Women, Doris Stevens (pictured) presented data on laws affecting women, resulting in the passage of the first international agreement on women's rights?
Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 12:25, 6 March 2016 (UTC)- Note: ALT1 is also good to go, if the prep builder prefers to use it for a set after International Women's Day. ALT1 hook verified and cited inline. Image appears in article and is public domain. Yoninah (talk) 12:28, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
