- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:06, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
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Dorothy Hazard
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[[File:|120x133px|Mistress Dorothy Hazard and the Women of Bristol Defending the Frome Gate against Prince Rupert, 1643 by Gerald Moira ]]
Mistress Dorothy Hazard and the Women of Bristol Defending the Frome Gate against Prince Rupert, 1643 by Gerald Moira
... that Dorothy Hazard effectively founded a Bristol church that survived for over 300 years?
Source: "...Mrs Dorothy Hazard, the effective founder of a Baptist church which, more than 300 years later, still flourishes" Collinson, 2003- ALT1:... that Dorothy Hazard, a preacher's wife, led a group of women in the defence of Bristol during the English Civil War (pictured)?
Source: "At one point, a group of women in the town, led by Dorothy Hazard and Joan Batten, held up the Royalist attack on the Frame [sic] Gate when the soldiers lost heart" Bennett, 2016
- ALT1:... that Dorothy Hazard, a preacher's wife, led a group of women in the defence of Bristol during the English Civil War (pictured)?
- Reviewed: Ancient Macedonians
Created by Yunshui (talk). Self-nominated at 11:04, 30 May 2017 (UTC).
- will review this, hopefully tomorrow --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:18, 2 June 2017 (UTC)
Interesting facts, on good sources, no copyvio obvious! I like the ALT much better, related to the licensed image. I guess the caption needs to be shortened. - Article: please provide some idea about a time in the lead, - readers will not know when These wars were, and as we have no life data, some hint at the period would be nice. - Do you intentionally link to the beginning of chapter 14 in Revelation, not verse 9? - Could you provide a year (instead of "subsequently") for the mural? Yes it's in the image caption, but should also be in the article. - How about a little lead, summarizing the main points? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:06, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
- Requested changes have been made. If you know how to link to specific lines on Wikisource please feel free to make the change; I'm not sure how to do it. Image caption could perhaps be reduced to "Mistress Dorothy Hazard... by Gerald Moira"? Yunshui 雲水 09:10, 10 July 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for the changes, I changed the bible source. I don't think we need the painter for the purpose of the DYK section, - different from article. My caption might be ''Mistress Dorothy Hazard and the Women of Bristol ..., 1643.
Offline source accepted AGF. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:08, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
- Requested changes have been made. If you know how to link to specific lines on Wikisource please feel free to make the change; I'm not sure how to do it. Image caption could perhaps be reduced to "Mistress Dorothy Hazard... by Gerald Moira"? Yunshui 雲水 09:10, 10 July 2017 (UTC)
