Template:Did you know nominations/Ed Krupp

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The result was: promoted by HaEr48 (talk) 05:12, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

Ed Krupp

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Ed Krupp in his Griffith Observatory office
Ed Krupp in his Griffith Observatory office

5x expanded by Shortsword (talk). Self-nominated at 17:29, 31 March 2017 (UTC).

  • @Shortsword: This substantial article is a fivefold expansion and is new enough and long enough. The hook is interesting and is cited inline to a reliable source. The image is appropriately licensed and the article is neutral. Using "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" I checked for close paraphrasing and was concerned by a few instances, particularly in the first paragraph of the "Archaeoastronomy" section. When these are sorted out, this should be ready to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:04, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Cwmhiraeth: "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" is an amazing tool. My only regret is that I wish I could have used it on the page while it was still in my sandbox. That would have eliminated the many many additions to the edit history of the page that I just made. Would you be so kind as to have another look and see if I have managed to eliminate your concerns. And thank you very much for your efforts. Shortsword (talk) 19:00, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
  • I am satisfied with your alterations. This is now good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:16, 14 April 2017 (UTC)