- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:03, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
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Egon Hartmann
Block B of Stalinallee, now Karl-Marx-Allee, Berlin
- ... that Egon Hartmann won the competition to design the East Berlin Stalinallee (pictured)? Source: various, for example und 1951 gewinnt er den 1. Preis im Wettbewerb für die städtebauliche und architektonische Gestaltung der Stalinallee, [1]
- ALT1:... that after winning a competition to design the East Berlin Stalinallee (pictured), Egon Hartmann moved to West Germany and won a prize in a West German planning competition for Berlin? Source: Der 1954 in den Westen gekommene Hartmann hatte in Berlin schon einmal einen Wettbewerb gewonnen – für einen 1950 gezeichneten Entwurf der Stalinallee, das monumentale Aufbausymbol der jungen DDR. Als er 1958 bei "Hauptstadt Berlin" gewann, [...], https://www.zeit.de/1990/51/verlorene-visionen/komplettansicht
- Reviewed: Bleach: Brave Souls
- Comment: Almost the six millionth article :)
Created by Kusma (talk). Self-nominated at 22:03, 26 January 2020 (UTC).
- I will review this one shortly. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 10:54, 27 January 2020 (UTC)
- Created on 23 January and nominated three days later.
- Prose length is fine; rated at Start-class.
- Sources are good quality and reliable.
- I couldn't get into reference [1] because of restrictions on my work PC, but most of the facts in the article are also supported by one or more of the other references. I am satisfied there are no significant gaps in the article.
- Both hooks are supported, although strictly speaking the West German prize mentioned in ALT1 relates to a competition for Berlin city centre specifically. Whether this needs to be made clear in the hook is debatable.
- When promoting, I would suggest tweaking the wording in both hooks as follows: ...to design the East Berlin Stalinallee → ...to design Stalinallee in East Berlin.
Verified as above. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 13:48, 27 January 2020 (UTC)
