Template:Did you know nominations/Ein Haus voll Glorie schauet

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Ein Haus voll Glorie schauet

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  • Reviewed: Hawaiian cleaner wrasse
  • Comment: The author of both text and melody has no article yet, but will get one.

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 15:20, 1 June 2018 (UTC).

  • Brilliant article, new and in date with sufficient prose. I've refined the hook to clarify and improve prose. The article is neutrally written and very well sourced. QPQ done and free of copyvio. No Swan So Fine (talk) 07:23, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. Sorry, I'm not happy with the changed hook, because it reads as if the tect was changed only for that one event. Help? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:56, 4 June 2018 (UTC)