- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:36, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
Eli Bebout
5x expanded by Jon698 (talk). Self-nominated at 09:43, 21 July 2021 (UTC).
- This is only a comment and not a review, but I would suggest the hook be reworded to prevent redundancy (it mentions "Wyoming House of Representatives" twice in quick succession). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:28, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall: Article was improved and expanded by A LOT more than 5x in the week prior to nomination. Long enough, sourced and no copyvio on Earwig. Article seems neutral and qpq has been provided. Hook is interesting and cited. Made a minor tweak to the hook per Narutolovehinata5's suggestion, I think it makes it much less clunky. BuySomeApples (talk) 00:20, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
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