Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth Alexander (astronomer)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:14, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

Elizabeth Alexander (astronomer)

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5x expanded by Worm That Turned (talk) and Staceydolxx (talk). Nominated by Worm That Turned (talk) at 19:57, 4 January 2016 (UTC).

  • 5× expansion, recent enough, hook is sourced and verified, no policy violations found with a quick check, QPQ done. May I suggest some slight paraphrasing of the hook: "... that Elizabeth Alexander was one of the first women to work in radio astronomy, while she actually preferred geology?" That's one less comma. Otherwise, good to go, also with the current hook. QVVERTYVS (hm?) 21:34, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
    No problems with the suggested alt. WormTT(talk) 21:38, 6 January 2016 (UTC)