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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:00, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
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Ellen Jens
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- ... that Wim T. Schippers' TV shows (all produced by Ellen Jens, a former script girl) introduced such characters as Sjef van Oekel (pictured, played by Dolf Brouwers, a former vacuum cleaner salesman), Barend Servet (IJf Blokker, a former drummer), and Jan Vos (Clous van Mechelen, a jazz musician)?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cabaret des Quat'z'Arts, Template:Did you know nominations/Tuya Soy, Template:Did you know nominations/P Sathasivam, Template:Did you know nominations/Ted Andrews.
- Comment: Please see Template:Did you know nominations/Wim T. Schippers (and Template:Did you know nominations/Pindakaasvloer, Template:Did you know nominations/Going to the Dogs)--this is the last one in the series, thankfully.
Created/expanded by Drmies (talk). Self nominated at 17:44, 27 August 2013 (UTC).
New enough, long enough and neutral. Well sourced but AGF on the sources in Foreign, which seem plausible. Hook is supported. 3 out of 4 were flagged as stubs, so I undid that - seems to me that over 1,500 means not a stub. Good to go. The hook is 296 chars. That is only 74 per article so not too long, but how about the 222-character ALT1 below? Aymatth2 (talk) 00:58, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Wim T. Schippers' TV shows, produced by Ellen Jens, introduced characters played by Dolf Brouwers (pictured), a former vacuum cleaner salesman, IJf Blokker, a former drummer, and Clous van Mechelen, a jazz musician?
- Hmm. Maybe. I suppose. It's just that they are such good names, and I'm not sure you realize that Ge Braadslee and Boy Bensdorp aren't even in there! Anyway, I'll agree, IF you stick "former script girl" back in, for purposes of symmetry etc. (And also, they are there to indicate that Schippers was kind of a career maker.) Drmies (talk) 02:03, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Wim T. Schippers' TV shows, produced by former script girl Ellen Jens, introduced characters played by Dolf Brouwers (pictured), a former vacuum cleaner salesman, IJf Blokker, a former drummer, and Clous van Mechelen, a jazz musician?