Template:Did you know nominations/Emily Ratajkowski 2

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The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 22:08, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Emily Ratajkowski

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Improved to Good Article status by TonyTheTiger (talk), Tinton5 (talk), Chaheel Riens (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 16:39, 7 October 2014 (UTC).

  • Recently promoted to GA, seems no problem at all to me, Nicely done. It is good to run, just need an alternate better hook (I mean rephrase), it'd be better if you write "featured in the music video" in the hook. And indirectly, the hook is mentioning two pieces of information, but that's not a problem. --Captain Assassin! «TCG» 20:06, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Rephrased, good work on the article. I'm promoting it to DYK, good to go. --Captain Assassin! «TCG» 01:50, 20 October 2014 (UTC)