- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
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Enno Hallek
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... that refugee Enno Hallek fled to Sweden and did not return to his native Estonia until 1989, and has since held several exhibitions of his art in the country?- ALT1: ... that artist Enno Hallek (example of art pictured) and his family fled the Soviet occupation of Estonia to Sweden on his father's fishing trawler?
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... that artist Enno Hallek since 1990 has worked on a series of paintings which he calls "portable sunsets"? - ALT3:
... that artist Enno Hallek since 1990 has worked on a series of paintings (pictured) which he has named "portable sunsets"?
- Reviewed: Bee
Created by BabbaQ (talk). Self-nominated at 18:15, 11 August 2015 (UTC).
Interesting life and work, on good sources, Swedish sources accepted AGF. I added an image and suggest to word something around his art rather than his Estonian-Swedish identity which I had to read several times. (Sorry if that is just me.) "Portable sunsets" seems catchy. If you want to stick with the original fact, please clarify that he was a refugee from Estonia clearly and sooner, and anyway in the article lead. Is there a more elegant wording for "Motives for his arts-pieces"? Please provide a publisher for all references, and a date if known. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:59, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: - I have taken care of the issues you mentioned, and added two more hooks. If there are more issues or suggestions let me know.BabbaQ (talk) 12:02, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, good ideas. I tweaked ALT1 a bit (Russian ...), but again don't think it's much about his art, - the precise place of landing with all links seems of no interest (to me). Stopping after trawler might work, indicating. I understand that "since" is used too much by us foreigners and should better be "from". Does the year matter? Is the subway station a sunset? If not please reword as ALT4. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:12, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- If you agree with me, ALT1 seems to be the best. I think we have a winner. It is really interesting.BabbaQ (talk) 12:15, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
I like to please, perhaps we can get the art on board of the trawler after all. I included Sweden. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:31, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- If you agree with me, ALT1 seems to be the best. I think we have a winner. It is really interesting.BabbaQ (talk) 12:15, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, good ideas. I tweaked ALT1 a bit (Russian ...), but again don't think it's much about his art, - the precise place of landing with all links seems of no interest (to me). Stopping after trawler might work, indicating. I understand that "since" is used too much by us foreigners and should better be "from". Does the year matter? Is the subway station a sunset? If not please reword as ALT4. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:12, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: - I have taken care of the issues you mentioned, and added two more hooks. If there are more issues or suggestions let me know.BabbaQ (talk) 12:02, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
