- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:29, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
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Eric Filia
... that Eric Filia worked at the Playboy Mansion while he was suspended by the University of California, Los Angeles?[1]
- Reviewed: 5th QPQ out of 7 from Template:Did you know nominations/1935 New York anti-lynching exhibitions
Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 01:18, 25 May 2021 (UTC).
New enough and long enough (over prose 1800 characters). Sufficient in-text citations. Article is short but appears to be neutral and free from close paraphrasing. No copyright violations suggested by Earwigs Copyvio Detector. QPQ satisfied. I would only suggest that the hook be tweaked a little bit to make it more broadly appealing to people unfamiliar with Filia, i.e. stating who exactly Filia was before/after working at the Playboy Mansion and what he did (e.g. "baseball player Eric Filia worked as a butler at...") — Preceding unsigned comment added by Animalparty (talk • contribs) 19:13, June 5, 2021 (UTC)
- Animalparty, it's always a fine line between giving up too much info in a hook or not enough. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:28, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that baseball player Eric Filia worked as a butler at the Playboy Mansion while he was suspended by the University of California, Los Angeles?
Alt 1 good to go. --Animalparty! (talk) 18:46, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
