Template:Did you know nominations/Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano

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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:03, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano

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Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano

... that while King Charles Albert initially mistrusted Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano (pictured), he eventually appointed him to his royal court? Source: Treccani

Reviewed: Harry Harper

Created by Ergo Sum (talk). Self-nominated at 17:06, 20 May 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article itself is fine and the hook is sourced adequately, but I would suggest changing it to mentioning Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano first so readers are most likely to click on him. I do take slight issue with the image used here because while it may be in the article, there is no alt text so add that. For the hook, I recommend one of these ALTs:

ALT1: ... that while Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano (pictured) was initially mistrusted by King Charles Albert, he was eventually appointed by him to his royal court?

ALT2: ... that while Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano (pictured) was initially mistrusted by King Charles Albert, he was eventually appointed by the king to his royal court?

ALT3: ... that while Filiberto Avogadro di Collobiano (pictured) was initially mistrusted by King Charles Albert, the king eventually appointed him to his royal court? K. Peake 08:03, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Added alt text to the article. I think Alt 2 would be best. Ergo Sum 14:11, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

I agree with you on ALT2 since it specifies who did the appointing with usage of "the king" after the comma, so the DYK hook now has my full approval. Thanks for adding the alt text too, that looks totally fine. K. Peake 06:48, 8 June 2021 (UTC)