- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:18, 22 March 2015 (UTC)
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Filipinki
edit... that Filipinki (pictured) were the first Polish all-girl vocal group and also Poland's leading female band of the 1960s?
Created by Selenium1972 (talk). Self nominated at 15:11, 12 March 2015 (UTC).
Long enough and new enough but Wikipedia is not a reliable source, please see that the article is suitably referenced from independent reliable sources. C679 20:51, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thank You. I added more references from different sources. Selenium1972 (talk) 22:37, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
- The source for the hook is in Polish, I tried reading it through Google translate, but couldn't verify the content (rule 3). The Polish word for first seems to be pierwszy or początkowy, neither of which is in the citation. Sources such as wordpress.com are not ideal and referencing may be improved (rule 4). The article itself could do with a copy-edit by a native user of English. C679 07:35, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
- I added another references from different sources which contain information that Filipinki were the first Polish girlsband - unfortunately it's also in Polish. You are right – "first" = "pierwszy" in Polish. Thanks Selenium1972 (talk) 16.15, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
- The referencing is looking a bit better, but the hook would work better without the second part, could you prose an alternative (alt1)? C679 15:56, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
- Of course – I replaced the hook, I hope that I did it right. Selenium1972 (talk) 18.40, 13 March 2015 (UTC)
