Template:Did you know nominations/Fly Me to the Moon (2023 film)

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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 01:33, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

Fly Me to the Moon (2023 film)

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... that the 2023 drama film Fly Me to the Moon marks Sasha Chuk's debut as a director, screenwriter and lead actress, making it her first feature film in all three categories? Source: ^[1]^[2]
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Created by Prince of Erebor (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

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Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 10:41, 16 April 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything checks out, but I don't think just the fact that she directed, wrote and acted in a leading role is interesting. What would be more interesting, in my view, is saying that it was her first time doing any of these things (at least from what the article says — "Chuk also served as the film's director, marking her directorial, scriptwriting, and acting debut in a feature film.") I believe this could be added to the hook to make it more interesting. Skyshiftertalk 21:02, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

@Skyshifter: Hi Skyshifter, thanks for reviewing!! So maybe change the hook to "...that the 2023 drama film Fly Me to the Moon marks Sasha Chuk's debut as a director, screenwriter and lead actress, making it her first feature film in all three categories?"——Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 04:06, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Skyshifter: Replaced with new hook. Please check.——Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 17:19, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
  - Good to go! Skyshiftertalk 17:27, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
    - @Skyshifter: Thanks for reviewing the article. Cheers!——Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 17:29, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

References

^ Lee, Edmund (April 9, 2024). "Fly Me to the Moon movie review: Hong Kong writer Sasha Chuk makes directing debut with wistful coming-of-age drama". South China Morning Post. Archived from the original on April 10, 2024. Retrieved April 13, 2024.
^ Ide, Wendy (October 23, 2023). "'Fly Me To The Moon': Tokyo Review". Screen Daily. Archived from the original on April 12, 2024. Retrieved April 13, 2024.

[1] Lee, Edmund (April 9, 2024). "Fly Me to the Moon movie review: Hong Kong writer Sasha Chuk makes directing debut with wistful coming-of-age drama". South China Morning Post. Archived from the original on April 10, 2024. Retrieved April 13, 2024.

[2] Ide, Wendy (October 23, 2023). "'Fly Me To The Moon': Tokyo Review". Screen Daily. Archived from the original on April 12, 2024. Retrieved April 13, 2024.

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