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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 16:23, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

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Flying Machines Which Do Not Fly

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Created by Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk). Self-nominated at 09:48, 8 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Flying Machines Which Do Not Fly; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • This is an editorial I casually know and it will thus be a pleasure to review this nomination in the coming days! WatkynBassett (talk) 21:48, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • The article was created on 7 September 2023 and nominated on the following day and is thus eligible.
  • The article has over 1,500 characters of readable prose.
  • The article is nicely sourced. I checked all sources and they cover their sentences - well done.
  • The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
  • I spotted no copyright or close-paraphrasing issues. Earwig picked up the quotes, which is entirely unconcerning.
  • QPQ still needs the tick or other final closure. Done.
  • Will review the hook soon! WatkynBassett (talk) 08:03, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
    • The hook has the right length, it is interesting (and a welcome source for optimism about the future), it is cited inline, WP:SNOPES considers the source reliable and one can easily check the veracity of the claim by reading the article. I would suggest, however, to drop the "for humanity" which I consider superfluous. Thinking about the hook I wondered what you think about the following modification, which take up the fancy wording of the editorial?
    • ALT1 ... that a 1903 New York Times editorial predicted it would take one to ten million years to develop a flying machine "which will really fly"?
    • Conclusion: @Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d: I will happily approve the original hook (with the dropped "for humanity" [if you do not feel strongly about this]) or my alternate suggestion if you prefer it. Thank you for providing us with welcome optimism about the future and a nicely cited work! WatkynBassett (talk) 07:30, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  • WatkynBassett, Thank you for the review! I am equally happy with the original hook or your proposed alternative. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 07:43, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d Good! Approving the original (without the "for humanity") and the ALT1 hook! Final choice is left to the promoter! WatkynBassett (talk) 08:02, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
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