Template:Did you know nominations/Forty Hadith (by Ayatollah Khomeini)

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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 07:18, 20 January 2016 (UTC)

Forty Hadith (by Ayatollah Khomeini )

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~~... that the Forty Hadith authored by Ayatollah Khomeini is a collection of personal interpretations of forty traditions attributed to the prophet Mohammad and The Twelve Imams?~~

ALT1:... that the Forty Hadith authored by Ayatollah Khomeini is a collection of personal interpretations of forty traditions attributed to the prophet Muhammad and The Twelve Imams?

Comment: Article was created by me and moved to mainspace on December 21

Created by Lstfllw203 (talk). Self-nominated at 13:42, 22 December 2015 (UTC).

: Article is new enough and long enough (2728 B). Article is sourced, and free of copyright problems. First reference is Persian, please write language of the source in parenthesis. Hook has been verified by provided inline citation. Hook's character count is within the legal limits. The hook must edit according to this policy. The title of article should be changed to better title and the article must be copyedit.Saff V. (talk) 11:23, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

@Saff V.: Thanks for your review. About the firs reference i can't understand your mean clearly, but i edit it. it's so better that you cheek it.According to WP:NAME, we should select the title be commonly recognizable, so due to search in Google, the common name of this book in English is "Forthy Hadith". But there are a lot scholars that write books exactly with this title, Forty Hadish. To demystify, i point to the author. If you have another suggestion, would be better offer. Best regardsLstfllw203 (talk) 15:55, 27 December 2015 (UTC)

@Lstfllw203: When language of a source is non-English, is better to write language of link in parenthesis. My suggestion for title is Forty Hadith of Ruhullah Khomeini.Saff V. (talk) 04:56, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

@Saff V.: The copy editing has been done by user:Fuhvah. But about the title of article, in this condition, according to WP:DAB we use parenthesis and put the word that remove the disambiguation in it!Lstfllw203 (talk) 09:41, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for copy edit the article. It is better to add more information about author of the book or is better to create a section for him in the article.Saff V. (talk) 10:35, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

~~After several copyedits the article is now slightly too short for DYK.~~ (now again sufficiently long) Could a phrase be added explaining what 'Wilayah and deeds of mankind' is? The Wilayah article mentions so many meanings that I have difficulties picking the right one. Thanks, Pgallert (talk) 11:55, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Major parts of the article is deleted by another users.Saff V. (talk) 13:04, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

@Pgallert:, I can't get your mean, why do you select the Wilayah? I want to add some sentence from this refrence about the style of author of book in writing of it.

Unfortunately I cannot read that source. What I mean is, to me, the Wilaya in "Wilayah and deeds of mankind" could mean governance, or the State, or the territory, or maybe something else. Can this be clarified? --Pgallert (talk) 20:46, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Comment I would like this DYK to be put on hold for a week or so, so that we can remove false information and unnecessary stuff from the article. Once we are done the review can continue. It may be kinda hard for a reviewer to read the article and find it changes in 12 hours time, so lets get a bit of stability and then continue. However, if a reviewer is willing to work with us in rewriting the article, he is more than welcome to kill two birds with one stone. Regards FreeatlastChitchat (talk) 03:04, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

@Pgallert: @Saff V.:there is a mistake. The word Wilayah means an administrative division and this word Walayah means guardianship. In forty Hadith (Ayatollah Khomeini) article, the correct word is the second one. According to this point, I edited article.Lstfllw203 (talk) 16:32, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

@Lstfllw203: The title of article is better to change Forty Hadith of Ruhullah Khomeini. Please add ALT hook according to new title.Saff V. (talk) 13:07, 17 January 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.:The title of article was changed. Also ALT1 was added. Thanks for your patient. Lstfllw203 (talk) 17:36, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your edits and contributions of other users. The ALT1 is final hook.Saff V. (talk) 06:35, 19 January 2016 (UTC)