Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Tarr

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The result was: promoted by George Ho (talk) 19:46, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

Frank Tarr

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  • ... that the former England international rugby player Frank Tarr was killed on 18 July 1915 by a splinter from a shell after telling his men to keep cover?
  • Reviewed: Per Holknekt
  • Comment: For 18 July, 100 years after death in WWI

5x expanded by FunkyCanute (talk). Self-nominated at 17:34, 26 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Meets expansion and length requirements, no copyvios or other issues were found. Meets hook requirements, is cited under reference #2. QPQ verified. Rainbow unicorn (talk) 02:28, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
  • There is close paraphrasing from the www.englandrugby.com source:
  • Source: Francis Nathaniel Tarr, known as Frank, was born at Ironville near Belper, Derbyshire, the only son of Frederick Tarr and his wife Emma.
  • Article: Frank Tarr was born at Ironville, near Belper, Derbyshire, on 14 August 1887, the only son of Frederick Tarr, a coal merchant, and his wife Emma.
  • Source: The battalion occupied dug-outs between Lake Zillebeke and the nearby railway line to the south-east of Ypres.
  • Article: the battalion occupied dugouts between Lake Zillebeke and the nearby railway line to the south-east of Ypres,
  • Source: Francis Tarr was killed on the afternoon of the 18 July 1915 whilst visiting the dug-outs nearer the lake.
  • Article: Tarr...was killed on the afternoon of 18 July 1915 whilst visiting the dugouts of the 5th Battalion, Lincolnshire Regiment, nearer the lake.
  • Source: He is also remembered on the family headstone in Welford Road Cemetery, and on memorials at Uppingham School, University College, Oxford (right), Oxford University RFC and the Richmond Athletic Ground (Richmond FC).
  • Article: He is remembered on the family headstone in Welford Road Cemetery, and on memorials at Uppingham School, University College, Oxford, Oxford University RFC and the Richmond Athletic Ground (Richmond FC).
  • Yoninah (talk) 23:52, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
  • OK, I've re-edited the Early life and Military career sections. FunkyCanute (talk) 07:47, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you. No close paraphrasing seen. Restoring tick per Rainbow unicorn's review. Yoninah (talk) 08:31, 17 July 2015 (UTC)