- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 00:30, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
Frankee Connolly
5x expanded by Launchballer (talk). Self-nominated at 13:33, 19 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Frankee Connolly; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
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Overall: ALT0 is pure name-checking; if the only thing a peice of prose states is what other groups the subject has played with, it should probably be a table or list instead. On ALT1: Musicians getting their start on social media is very common these days, and it's unclear to me that this wasn't true when MySpace was big. ALT2: Too lacking in context. With that being said, the hook is the only problem, article is fine Mach61 (talk) 15:12, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- I forgot that Myspace was once big. I am going to do some more research, but for now: ALT3: ... that the British musician Frankee Connolly has had UK Top 20 hits as part of a manufactured band and a non-manufactured band?--Launchballer 17:46, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but it's still unclear to me why a typical reader would be interested hook. Perhaps try a different hook concept altogether; there's lots of stuff in her interview, including that she never took singing lessons before being signed. Mach61 (talk) 19:34, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that Frankee Connolly (pictured) signed to Xenomania and took her first singing lessons - in that order?--Launchballer 09:14, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Approved Mach61 (talk) 15:12, 4 February 2024 (UTC)