- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:57, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
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Freddy Galvis
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... that Philadelphia Phillies infielder Freddy Galvis (pictured) participated in the Little League World Series?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/2015 State of the Union Address
- Comment: Open to any alternate hook, perhaps something about Omar Vizquel.
5x expanded by Go Phightins! (talk). Self nominated at 02:48, 18 February 2015 (UTC).
- @Go Phightins!:, I like the idea of the hook. Perhaps make it about the fact that he was noticed by scouts and subsequently signed by the Phillies at the age of 16. Otherwise, it's ready to go. Length is good, images meet the guidelines, etc. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 19:27, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- OK, how about:
- ALT 1: ... that Philadelphia Phillies infielder Freddy Galvis (pictured) participated in the Little World Series, and subsequently, at age 16, signed his first contract?
for ALT 1. Galvis was some very exceptional talent for his age I must say. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 03:17, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
@Sportsguy17: this review needs more than a check of the hook, article length, and image. You should provide a review that explicitly confirms that the five main DYK criteria have been covered. Yoninah (talk) 11:18, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
. Making sure that this DYK nomination met the DYK criterion is a given. But just for clarity's sake, it meets all five of the criterion and is all good to go. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 23:40, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
