Template:Did you know nominations/Frederick Henry Rich
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:37, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
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Frederick Henry Rich
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- ... that Col. Frederick Henry Rich investigated over 250 railway accidents, including that at Staplehurst (pictured) in which the novelist Charles Dickens and his mistress were involved?
- Comment: Reviewed 2015 Scottish League Cup Final
Created by Bikeroo (talk). Self nominated at 10:30, 2 February 2015 (UTC).
Right up my alley. Length, newness, cites all good to go. Just need that QPQ. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:50, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
ALT1 ... that Col. Frederick Henry Rich investigated over 250 railway accidents—including the Staplehurst accident (pictured), in the aftermath of which Charles Dickens tended the injured?- EEng (talk) 04:20, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Col. Frederick Henry Rich investigated over 250 railway accidents—including Staplehurst (pictured), where Charles Dickens tended the injured?
- QPQ complete, let's pick an ALT and go! Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:00, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2 is better than ALT1, but here Staplehurst is shorthand for "the Staplehurst accident" (it certainly doesn't mean Staplehurst as a place per se), so I think where needs to become after which or (perhaps better) at which. EEng (talk) 15:08, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- Context seems pretty clear to me, especially given the "pictured". But a "the" in front and "incident" in the link would be fine. Maury Markowitz (talk) 01:13, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2 is better than ALT1, but here Staplehurst is shorthand for "the Staplehurst accident" (it certainly doesn't mean Staplehurst as a place per se), so I think where needs to become after which or (perhaps better) at which. EEng (talk) 15:08, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3 ... that Col. Frederick Henry Rich investigated over 250 railway accidents—including the Staplehurst incident (pictured), in the aftermath of which Charles Dickens tended the injured? EEng (talk) 02:14, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
- It's not a question of being misleading, rather that Staplehurst, where makes no sense since an accident isn't a place. We can certainly take out incidents, though.
- ALT4 ... that Col. Frederick Henry Rich investigated over 250 railway accidents—including Staplehurst (pictured), in the aftermath of which Charles Dickens tended the injured?
- EEng (talk) 14:51, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
- It's not a question of being misleading, rather that Staplehurst, where makes no sense since an accident isn't a place. We can certainly take out incidents, though.
Thanks for the reviews. To enable this to progress to the next step, someone needs to give it a green tick.({{subst:DYKtick}}) Bikeroo (talk) 20:57, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
QPQ provided, all good to go. Maury Markowitz (talk) 21:54, 15 February 2015 (UTC)