Template:Did you know nominations/Göran Fredrik Göransson

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:16, 22 November 2016 (UTC)

Göran Fredrik Göransson

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Portrait of Göransson
Portrait of Göransson
  • ... that Göran Fredrik Göransson (pictured) was the first to successfully implement the Bessemer process for steel production on an industrial scale? Source: "Göran Fredrik Göransson". Tekniska Museet. 24 January 2012. Retrieved 2 November 2016."Sandvikens Jernverk AB - innovative since 1862" (PDF). nasdaqomx.com. p. 1. Retrieved 3 November 2016.

Created by Ciridae (talk). Self-nominated at 10:55, 5 November 2016 (UTC).

I formatted a bit, hope that's ok, and will probably look into it, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:25, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
Congratulations to you first DYK nom!. Nice article, more substantial than the Swedish one! In case you translated anything from the Swedish (which I can't tell) you should make a note on the talk page. Many and good sources, mostly in Swedish which I accept AGF (short for "assuming good faith). In the legacy section, you mention the son who would succeed his father ..., and then say "he" meaning the father. I think the best way to avoid that is to mention the succession after the death. Sometimes a load of references for one fact seems too much of a good thing, - consider to have no more than two. No reference is needed in the lead (summary) as long as the facts there are sourced in the article. - The hook is fine, and I like better without the year which doesn't make it more interesting ;) - Approved! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:09, 8 November 2016 (UTC)