- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:05, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
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Gün Sazak
edit- ... that one of the accused assassins of Turkish former government minister Gün Sazak later hijacked an airplane to Bulgaria with accomplices?
- Reviewed: Hashem Shabani
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self nominated at 20:27, 14 February 2014 (UTC).
- Hook is a good length, interesting and referenced. Article is new, length is fine, and well referenced (AGF for foreign language references). However, the article needs a rewrite as it isn't written in the best English in places. For example, "A minibus passing by the scene hindered Babacan to shoot" and "Gül shot and severely wounded Gün Sazak at his back". Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 18:25, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks. An editor is needed for copyediting because I'm at my wits' end. --CeeGee 18:37, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
- Victuallers has copyedited in full. Pls, proceed with reviewing process. --CeeGee 21:00, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
- I have also added two bits so dont want to approve (but IMO its fine now) Victuallers (talk) 09:49, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for your great job Victuallers. Sorry for my misleading post above. I meant the DYK reviewer Gaia Octavia Agrippa to continue. In the meantime, I posted a tb on his user talk page. --CeeGee 10:00, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
The article reads much better now. AGF for foreign language refs, now good to go. Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 12:20, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
