Template:Did you know nominations/Gaston Marie Jacquier

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:40, 16 July 2017 (UTC)

Gaston Marie Jacquier

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Created by Jgefd (talk). Self-nominated at 22:16, 19 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Newness and length checked, very well written (I find one-liner sections annoying, and the MOS discourages them, but that's not anything to hold against the article), no plagiarism; QPQ done. All hooks check out. ALT1, which I would scrap; I personally prefer ALT2. Please note however that the original hook exceeds 200 characters, and ALT1 gets almost there. This is because they are both a bit wordy. I propose:
ALT3: ... that after Catholic bishop Gaston Marie Jacquier was assassinated in Algiers, Archbishop Duval ordered priests not to wear clerical clothing or display the cross in public?
ALT4: ... that Catholic bishop Gaston Marie Jacquier was assassinated in Algiers by a man with a history of mental illness, although some argue that the killer had a religious motivation? Dahn (talk) 09:22, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for checking out the nomination, I like both of those new alternates! Jgefd (talk) 18:52, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
Most welcome. With your permission, I'll strike out the original and ALTs 1--2 and keep the other ALTs to help the editors moving this to the queue. Dahn (talk) 19:15, 26 June 2017 (UTC)