Template:Did you know nominations/Gian Piero Ventrone

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:57, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Gian Piero Ventrone

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Source: https://www.repubblica.it/sport/calcio/2022/10/06/news/morto_giampiero_ventrone-368784165/
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- Comment: I had two pending QPQs did in August. I don't remember which page I reviewed. The article is also nominated for recent deaths at ITN, but it won't be a bolded link.

Created by Dr Salvus (talk). Self-nominated at 22:06, 6 October 2022 (UTC).

Age and length good. Source good on current hook. No QPQ link provided, but I found discussion here about past contributions and at least one review here.

My one hesitation: I'm not sure Ventroni's nickname is striking enough for the hook. Maybe instead:

If others think the original hook is good enough, I'm happy to be overruled. This is my first DYK review.

Brian Hamilton (talk) 16:59, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

ALT2 ... that athletic trainer Gian Piero Ventrone, nicknamed "marine" for his very hard and tiring training sessions, made his players ring a "bell of shame" when they were too exhausted to continue? [1] Bdhamilton What do you think? Dr Salvus 17:49, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

ALT2 is great! But I'm now noticing, too, that there are some significant copyvio problems from a source not included in the references. Those will need to be addressed before this gets approved. Brian Hamilton (talk) 19:55, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

Bdhamilton I can swear that the website did copy from me and not vice versa, without any attrubion! Dr Salvus 20:11, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

Yikes! Okay, yeah, I can see that the overlapping passages were part of your initial edit on October 6, and are dated October 9 on the other site. I buy it! Approved with ALT2. Brian Hamilton (talk) 20:41, 16 October 2022 (UTC)