Template:Did you know nominations/Glauben können wie du
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:01, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
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Glauben können wie du
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Schlegel in 2017
- ... that in the lyrics of "Glauben können wie du" by Helmut Schlegel (pictured), Mary is addressed, wishing to believe, hope and love as she did? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Matt Page (artist)
- Comment: We might say that the song was later made part of an oratorio for which he wrote the libretto but would prefer to stick with its content. In October please. Dedicated (in retrospect) to the memory of Allen3, who was asked to resign after he was unafraid and promoted an Easter hymn with a funny hook to the main page.
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 07:34, 6 October 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and has no copyright problems as far as I can see. The hook however is difficult to interpret. How about - Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:28, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1
... that the hymn "Glauben können wie du" by Helmut Schlegel (pictured), is addressed to Mary, yearning for her virtues of faith, hope and love?
- Thank you for trying, however I think "yearning" is too strong, and virtue is not in the article, intentionally so. It's more looking at a model, an attitude, - perhaps you can make something along those lines? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:18, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that the hymn "Glauben können wie du" by Helmut Schlegel (pictured) is addressed to Mary, and relates to her example of faith, hope and love? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:46, 7 October 2017 (UTC)
- I like it but miss "lyrics", - I found no room to mention the swinging melody by Raabe, but it sounds now as if Schlegel created all of the hymn. Perhaps drop "hymn" at all? not an attractive word I guess. - I removed a comma.
- ALT3 ... that "Glauben können wie du" by Helmut Schlegel (pictured) is addressed to Mary, and relates to her examplary faith, hope and love? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:09, 7 October 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. The image is appropriately licensed. Approving ALT3. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:10, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
