- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Chipmunkdavis (talk) 13:23, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
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Godfrey Hodgson
- ... that British journalist Godfrey Hodgson, who covered American politics, society, and values, showed that the first Thanksgiving did not include turkey and cranberry sauce? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2021/jan/28/godfrey-hodgson-obituary
- ALT1:... that British journalist Godfrey Hodgson, who covered American politics, society, and values, reported from 48 out of the 50 states of the United States? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2021/jan/28/godfrey-hodgson-obituary
Created by Ktin (talk). Self-nominated at 21:57, 31 January 2021 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I like both hook, but the first better, also at present, the other one is missing the citation right after the fact, - please add that just in case. - In the article: In the lead sentence, "studied" might suggest academic studies. I suggest that you read the article loud to yourself, watching for "also" ;) - Under publications/books, we don't need his name at all (who else?), but certainly not in every row. I trimmed a bit, please check that. I think turkey and sauce (hook) is more natural than sauce and turkey (article). - I just also nominated someone who recently died: Wilhelm Knabe. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:43, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks Gerda. Made a few changes that I agree with. You are right, there were too many 'also's :) Trimmed them. Also added the citation right after the fact for the second hook. I was going to review Wilhelm Knabe (who btw has received an order of merit from NRW), but, someone else has already reviewed that one. I guess I was late. Good luck. Ktin (talk) 01:18, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
