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The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:39, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
Article is currently a GAN and the nominator plans to renominate this again if it passes, but for now this is not good to go.

Goodbye (The Humans song)

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5x expanded by Cartoon network freak (talk). Self-nominated at 21:42, 11 May 2018 (UTC).

  • Not a full review yet but the hook is ineligible because it does not meet the length requirement. Surtsicna (talk) 11:49, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
@Surtsicna: I hope I could fix the issue... Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:56, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
That was very fast, thank you! Unfortunately, the article does not meet the expansion criterium: it was not expanded fivefold in the 7 days preceding the nomination, as is obvious when comparing the 3 May version to the present one. The article is very well written, however, and I expect it to successfully pass the good article review. I suggest that you nominate it again once it qualifies as a GA. I would also suggest using a more catchy hook; this one is too bland for such an interesting article. Surtsicna (talk) 12:12, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
Totally agree; I will wait for the GAN. Best;Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:06, 20 May 2018 (UTC)