Template:Did you know nominations/Goodbye Halo

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:12, 24 August 2018 (UTC)
Nominator tried to G7 this as well.

Goodbye Halo

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  • Reviewed: Exempt from reviewing since this is only my second nomination.

Moved to mainspace by Aspening (talk). Self-nominated at 19:57, 31 July 2018 (UTC).

  • I don't think this hook is very interesting, as it mainly appeals to a limited group (i.e. horse-racing fans). In addition, the hook does not appear to be interesting as it lacks focus: does the hook focus on Goodbye Halo, or William Reed? A new hook is needed here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:28, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
I'm going to withdraw this nomination. Aspening (talk) 13:34, 23 August 2018 (UTC)