- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Oceanh (talk) 08:55, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
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Grace Nicholson
edit- ... that art dealer Grace Nicholson designed the building that now houses the USC Pacific Asia Museum?
- Comment: This entry was created as part of the fourth Unforgetting LA edit-a-thon, hosted by East of Borneo.
- Reviewed: Felisa Vanoff
Created by Penny Richards (talk). Self nominated at 16:51, 21 June 2014 (UTC).
New enough, long enough. Hook is interesting, but is not directly cited (all hooks have to have citations at the end of the sentence). There are also a few instances of slightly promotional language like "award-winning". --Jakob (talk) 20:47, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the careful review. I have removed "award-winning" and cited the hook at the end of its sentence.Penny Richards (talk) 23:23, 21 June 2014 (UTC)Penny Richards
Checked for copyvio and found none. No other problems detected. Good to go. Do you think you can find a free image anywhere?--Jakob (talk) 01:19, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks! Checked in my usual spots, but I'll keep digging and ask around. There are plenty of photos of Nicholson (many of them from before 1920), it's just finding one that's useable here.Penny Richards (talk) 02:26, 22 June 2014 (UTC)Penny Richards
