Template:Did you know nominations/Henry Dunker

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The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 20:13, 22 June 2014 (UTC)

Henry Dunker

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... that Henry Dunker (pictured) willed his fortune to the Henry and Gerda Dunker donation fund which subsequently funded many improvements to the city of Helsingborg?

Reviewed:V.P. Ramakrishna Pillai

Created by BabbaQ (talk), GoingBatty (talk), Dwpaul (talk), and Werldwayd (talk, Victuallers (talk). Nominated by BabbaQ (talk) at 16:25, 14 June 2014 (UTC).

Article is new enough, long enough, and compliant with policy (no copyvio by direct translation detected). Source [8] appears to be a wiki and may not be reliable, so I changed the hook fact to be sourced by [2] (which was already used to source it in the lead, just not the body). Hook has thus been verified by a RS citation. Picture is free and looks good at 100px. If you don't mind, I suggest the following tweak to the blurb to get richest man fact in:

ALT1: * ... that Sweden's richest man, Henry Dunker (pictured), willed his entire fortune a foundation which subsequently funded many improvements to the city of Helsingborg?

--ThaddeusB (talk)

Looks great. Thanks!--BabbaQ (talk) 16:13, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

with preference for ALT1. (I know I "wrote" it, but it is only a slight tweak of the suggested blurb so I think requiring a 3rd party to re-checkmark it is unnecessary bureaucracy.) --ThaddeusB (talk) 16:18, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

Note: I confirm that ALT1 is acceptable and short enough, and that it is sourced in Swedish-language citation #2 which is accepted AGF. (I do not think it is necessary to repeat the rest of the review which I take on trust).--Storye book (talk) 06:44, 17 June 2014 (UTC)