Template:Did you know nominations/Hindu Temple of Dayton
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:47, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
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Hindu Temple of Dayton
edit- ... that the Hindu Temple of Dayton in Ohio was consecrated in 1985 and underwent two years of renovations starting in 2011?
- Reviewed: Zosia March
Created by Mvblair (talk). Self nominated at 05:19, 11 May 2014 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, but some quality issues. Too many single-sentence paragraphs, many of which are unsourced. Rule of thumb is at least one source per paragraph. Hook checks out, though a bit pedestrian. Aboutmovies (talk) 06:04, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, Aboutmovies! I went added some references and cleaned up the paragraphs, as you suggested. Would you recommend a better hook for this page? I think a picture would greatly improve the page by showing the contrast of a beautiful Hindu temple in such an area, but I'm having trouble finding references to the architecture. Any suggestions? Mvblair (talk) 11:52, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- I don't know if this helps. You could find an image on Commons for this, I think. I'm not Hindu, so I found it interesting about bathing Venkateswara and Shiva. Maybe you could expand on that ritual a little for non-Hindus. Put one of those images in the article, and then a hook something like, " ... that at the Hindu Temple of Dayton , Shiva (pictured) is bathed every Monday." — Maile (talk) 12:57, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- good to go on the quality issue; as to the hook, when I read the article I also found the most interesting part to be about the bathing, which might not be interesting to Hindus as routine, but for others it sticks out. I'd suggest an alt along those lines. Aboutmovies (talk) 20:04, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- I don't know if this helps. You could find an image on Commons for this, I think. I'm not Hindu, so I found it interesting about bathing Venkateswara and Shiva. Maybe you could expand on that ritual a little for non-Hindus. Put one of those images in the article, and then a hook something like, " ... that at the Hindu Temple of Dayton , Shiva (pictured) is bathed every Monday." — Maile (talk) 12:57, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, Aboutmovies! I went added some references and cleaned up the paragraphs, as you suggested. Would you recommend a better hook for this page? I think a picture would greatly improve the page by showing the contrast of a beautiful Hindu temple in such an area, but I'm having trouble finding references to the architecture. Any suggestions? Mvblair (talk) 11:52, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
