Template:Did you know nominations/Irving Freese

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The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter (babble) @ 23:11, 31 January 2013 (UTC)

Irving Freese

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Created/expanded by Gregbard (talk). Self nom at 14:20, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

  • Shortened the hook slightly. Nyttend (talk) 20:42, 22 January 2013 (UTC)
  • The article's age, length and sourcing are fine. The hook is a good one, but it doesn't appear to be explicitly sourced in the article. Alansohn (talk) 20:11, 23 January 2013 (UTC)
I copied the ref from one sentence over which had applied to the whole paragraph. "The Norwalk Hour. Irving Freese Five-Term Mayor Dies of Heart Ailment at Age 61" The information is in the fifth paragraph of that article.
With the added source the article is good to go. Alansohn (talk) 17:08, 31 January 2013 (UTC)