Template:Did you know nominations/It Happened in Monterey

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The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:27, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

It Happened in Monterey

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Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and Miyagawa (talk). Nominated by Miyagawa (talk) at 12:10, 25 March 2016 (UTC).

  • I think ALT1 is the best hook, but it needs the comma removed. Interesting enough, and it's cited with a direct link to the page in Google Books. Article is neutral and well written. QPQ checks out, and no image in the nom. Take out the comma in ALT1 and it's good to go. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 00:20, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Removed comma and struck other ALTS. Yoninah (talk) 05:26, 26 April 2016 (UTC)