Template:Did you know nominations/Jakarta Marathon

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:06, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

Jakarta Marathon

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~~... that Jakarta Marathon is the "biggest running event of Indonesia"?~~

ALT1:~~... that in 2014 edition of Indonesia's Jakarta Marathon limited African athletes were invited because of outbreak of Ebola in Africa?~~
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Al-Istibsar

Created by Human3015 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:48, 19 November 2015 (UTC).

I'll review this article. Also, I fixed some grammatical errors. @Human3015: I also suggest ALT3, a grammar rewrite of ALT1, and ALT2, a rewrite of Hook 1: epic genius (talk) 15:15, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that the Jakarta Marathon is considered the "biggest running event of Indonesia"?
ALT3: ... that in the 2014 edition of Indonesia's Jakarta Marathon, a limited number of African athletes were invited because of the 2014 Ebola outbreak in Africa?

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: epic genius (talk) 15:15, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

@Epicgenius: Thanks for your review, can you tell what exactly are the issues with article? I don't have any problem with alternative hooks provided by you. I have stricken other hooks. Thanks for correction. I think article is interesting, it is prime marathon of Indonesia. --Human3015^TALK 15:46, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

@Human3015: The only problem I had was with the hooks. Also, I checked one of the sources, which said "2015 edition," so I paraphrased. epic genius (talk) 15:47, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

And also, ALT3 is more interesting than ALT2. epic genius (talk) 15:49, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

@Epicgenius: Ok, if there was only problem of hooks then I have stricken my hook and kept only improved hooks by you. I think if there is no other issue then you give tick mark to the article to close this. Thank you. --Human3015^TALK 16:00, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

Done. ALT3 is good to go. epic genius (talk) 16:02, 19 November 2015 (UTC)