Template:Did you know nominations/Javier Corral Jurado

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:00, 2 July 2016 (UTC)

Javier Corral Jurado

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... that Javier Corral, the Governor-elect of Chihuahua, served in the 57th, 58th, 59th, 61st, 62nd and 63rd Mexican federal legislatures?

Reviewed: Michael O. Tunnell

5x expanded by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 23:00, 8 June 2016 (UTC).

Expansion appears to be x4, short of x5. All sentences supporting a part of the hook fact needs a reference directly afterwards. QPQ done. --Soman (talk) 07:40, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

@Soman: It now should be at 5x. Thanks for letting me know. Raymie (t • c) 21:20, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

Expansion date, length, hook checks out. --Soman (talk) 11:04, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

DYK Queue Admin comment - The current lead is unacceptable, please summarize the subject. — Coffee // have a cup // beans // 11:46, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Let's get an ALT1 and ALT2 even if I'm unsure what is exactly meant here:...

ALT1: ... that Javier Corral is named for the singer Javier Solís, who died several months before his birth?

ALT2: ... that Javier Corral was referred to as "the kid journalist" when he worked for El Diario de Juárez at the age of 11?

Raymie (t • c) 20:02, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh wait, the lead article, not the hook... Raymie (t • c) 20:03, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

This article is a five-fold expansion and is long enough and new enough. The article is neutral and I doubt there are any policy issues. Approving ALT1 but not the other two hooks; ALT0 because it is uninteresting and ALT2 because I cannot find the fact mentioned in the source #3. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:33, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

The first paragraph under Other Work lacks at least one cite, per Rule D2, and there is a "when" tag in the last sentence under Early life and education. Yoninah (talk) 22:05, 2 July 2016 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I found the info on his degree from UDO, so that'll be fixed. The missing paragraph cite has information from the SIL and I just added that cite. Raymie (t • c) 22:23, 2 July 2016 (UTC)

I should note that the missing citation issue was a result of a paragraph reorganization done by another user which added section headers. Raymie (t • c) 22:33, 2 July 2016 (UTC)

OK, thanks. All cites in place. Restoring tick (foreign-language hook refs) per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:58, 2 July 2016 (UTC)